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Questions Constantly Arisen

Questions Constantly Arisen

Questions constantly arisen…
Do u love me?
R u in this?
Because it’s said that,
There are blank stares on my face.
Maybe I am in a daze… And I don’t realize it
Because its natural when it comes 2 u.
Nothing bothers me anymore….
My mind is free from the bullshit…
U take me away….
I’m above the clouds….
High as I’ve ever been
I’m so at peace
This is the state u put me in…
I wake up thinking of u…
So everyday is sunny…
I go 2 sleep thinking of u….
So every night is enchanting…
U make things magical…
There4 I can’t get enough of u !

© 2011  Craig Watson

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About Mr. Watson

I'm a person who believes in Happiness & Love... I feel that it empowers us to unimaginable heights... Not just the aspect of Romance... But a Love for Life... Beauty & the Unknown! However, As Positive as I try to be... the struggles of Life are relevant in my world... Perfection doesn't exist and Wise Choices haven't always been made! I try to describe those things in full detail... Bringing u visual imagery through my Poetry ! I Love Feedback... GOOD... or BAD.

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  1. I liked this piece, I enjoy your modern use of vernacular in poetry, it added to the architecture and flow to this piece. I also liked the almost meditative aspect you found as solace in this person, beautiful! ~ Rose

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  2. it helps.

    awesome thoughts shared.

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  3. lacunaecorridors

    Miss love like this. Thanks for sharing!!

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  4. I’m going to go out on a limb here and say you are in love! Nice write!

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    • Lol thanks… I really appreciate the comments !
      I’m not sure everyone looks at this poem 4 what it really is. It tells a story of A man in a relationship and his partner constantly asks if he’s in this or does he love her… because he’s in a trance all the time. The blank stares on his face are because of another woman! And that other woman brings him such delight !
      Did you get that from reading this ?

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  5. Oh my I was fooled too caught up in the sweetness I didn’t notice the twist lol

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  6. amazing passion, well done.

    🙂

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  7. How romantic! Your words are magical indeed.

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