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Breath Of Fresh Air

Ur like a breath of fresh air
U take me 2 a time when…
Love was brand new…
Heartache was unknown…
And mistakes haven’t been made…
U r the reason happiness
Still lives within my soul..
U give me life…
U give me ambition…
That’s it…
U took me there
2 that place I’ve been yearning to go…
Better than any sexual encounter …
Higher than any drug could ever take u…
U took me to that place…
Truthfully…
I’m not sure if I’ve been here b4…

© 2011  Craig Watson

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About Mr. Watson

I'm a person who believes in Happiness & Love... I feel that it empowers us to unimaginable heights... Not just the aspect of Romance... But a Love for Life... Beauty & the Unknown! However, As Positive as I try to be... the struggles of Life are relevant in my world... Perfection doesn't exist and Wise Choices haven't always been made! I try to describe those things in full detail... Bringing u visual imagery through my Poetry ! I Love Feedback... GOOD... or BAD.

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  1. This poem makes me excited to feel that experience again…keep up the good work. You have a loving soul!!

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  2. After reading some of your poetry I can tell you have really felt these feelings, possibly a certain person is motivating you to write. Anyways, it’s great stuff. Very intriguing style and imagery.

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  3. Hi,
    It’s Luna.

    a few things.

    1. You have great talent.

    2. I just updated my site with 50 more poetry links, and will have at least 30 more over the next 24hrs.

    3. Please post your poem in my clambake. i would love to see you there, and have other’s read you.

    and last….

    4. Jingle poetry found me 3 months ago, and they have a great community of poets there. You can post your poem there also (which i highly recomend) until tomarow I think it is. Their site is below.

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

    I do hope to see you soon!

    Luna

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  4. p.s. i am going to link your site at mine. under likes.

    okay?

    Luna

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  5. Thank u. And Sure…That’s fine! I’m checking the listed sites now!

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  6. You express the excitement of newly found love very well. Hope to read more! Thanks for visiting my site too!

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  7. This poem excites me, thinking about that one person who takes me to that place. Beautifully done Mr. Watson.

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  8. How romantic! Can relate to the feeling so well…:-)

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  9. I’ve read several of your poems and I have to say, this is by far my favorite.

    For me, I cannot imagine a day not loving my wife or being loved by her. Love is what keeps me going in a life that is filled with so many ups and downs.

    Very nicely done, Craig!

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  10. Oh so beautiful and romantic. It would be lovely to feel that love once again I think. Thanks for sharing, Mr. Watson! 🙂

    A Poetic World – My Potluck Post

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  11. Wonderful story and well said. I have found a love like the one you describe, with my dear wife, Sherry. Beautiful writing.

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  12. Takes one back to when everything was fresh. Well done. Happy Potluck!

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  13. romantic and fun.

    😉

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  14. This is awesome!

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  15. well deserved award, smiles.

    get ready to join poets rally week 58 tomorrow.

    smiles.
    Happy Holidays.

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