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Below Freezing Temperatures

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Below freezing temperatures
Whenever ur near.
Whenever ur away…
With every thought of u
I get feverish.
Ur scent then fills the air.
With that…
My mind paints the portrait
Of an entire fantasy world!
Yet ur my reality …
But yet…
It’s u that I’ve never caressed b4!
I find myself trying to make my heart beat a little slower…
But the more I think about u
Its picking up it’s pace…
Adrenalin takes over my focus 
Ur becoming an obsession.
Only ur presence takes it away!

© 2011 Craig Watson

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About Mr. Watson

I'm a person who believes in Happiness & Love... I feel that it empowers us to unimaginable heights... Not just the aspect of Romance... But a Love for Life... Beauty & the Unknown! However, As Positive as I try to be... the struggles of Life are relevant in my world... Perfection doesn't exist and Wise Choices haven't always been made! I try to describe those things in full detail... Bringing u visual imagery through my Poetry ! I Love Feedback... GOOD... or BAD.

16 responses »

  1. This love poem almost gives me goosebumps. 🙂 I like the way you describe the sensation of being in love, it is like a fever. Beautiful!

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  2. amazing!
    “I find myself trying to make my heart beat a little slower…”

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  3. Jaan Pehchaan

    Beautiful, my dear Watson! I could literally experience the emotion in your words!
    Here is mine:
    http://jaanpehchaan.wordpress.com/2011/05/14/under-the-influence/ – Part 1 of 3!

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  4. Truth in words the emotion of love! Nice.

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  5. Hey, Mr. Watson. This is really well done. I felt it cold and hot.

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  6. sweet feverish ..lovely winter piece.

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  7. you write perfect poetry,
    keep it up.

    Glad to land here,
    Amazing poetic muses shared,
    Smiles.

    Welcome joining us for poets rally week 57,
    A random poem or a free verse is okay.
    Hope to see you in.

    Happy Thursday.
    Xoxox

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