You And Me
I want us to build a fire
From our passion
And let our inner juices put it out
Just waiting on the day…
I can make you scream and shout.
I want to break all the rules
With unimaginable aspects of intimacy.
On a magical night
That involves only you and me.
When it comes to limits…
Usually…
There would be some.
But for this long-awaited moment with you…
As far as limits…
There will be none.
I just want to lay back
And watch you pounce on me like a lion with its prey
And this being the first of many encounters
Its my mission
To make sure you never forget this special day.
Your body is so soft
Your fluids are so sweet
I’ll swallow all your juices
Even from the deepest depth of your sea.
I’m on my knees pleading…
To taste in between.
Licking till you catch convulsions
And its the top of your lungs you scream.
When you think I’m finished
Its time for me to lay pipe
Not stroking too fast
And definitely not too slow
But the perfect speed
So that I bring the heat just right.
To hear you yell my name
Gives me energy you wouldn’t believe
Vigorous motion all night
Until morning
Where I’m leaving your body light and serene
© 2011 Craig Watson
Mr. Watson 
That was good, very passionate! All I can say is wow, that’s one blessed chic.
Haha…. Thank you! Glad u enjoyed!
That’s hot! The flow is good. Nice!
Very romantic – lovely flow in your words
Thank you !
um, yeah let me take a deep breathe here, get my tongue out of my stomache and go….HOLY SHIITEE! you have a way with words!
Thanks Luna! 🙂
hot, hot … so passionate, vivid, almost painful to read!
LOVE IT 🙂 I’ve been doing a lot of erotic poems myself recently …. some more should be up on my blog in a couple days.
One thing, the line “When you think I’m finish” … should be When you think I’m finishED … just a grammatical adjustment 🙂
Another thing – can I link to you on my blog? I want to add you to my blogroll. Great job, Craig!
O wow …. I overlooked that! Thanks! I just corrected it! And sure… you can add me to your blog roll! Thank you…
Thanks … All I gotta say is that this should have a ‘LOVE’ button, not just a ‘like’ 😉
Scorching!!
WoW! Sensuality perfectly penned.
Certainly steamy!
Nice one.
so hot! an expert 🙂
impressed.
well done.
🙂
very nice flow to this piece. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing:)
Thanks… Glad you enjoyed!
Smoking hot!
Fantastically sensual 🙂
🙂 I could do with cigaret after reading this poem. And I don’t even smoke!
Romantic and sexy. Very well written.
Thank you for your visit… I appreciate you taking the time to stop by. Sweet prose, you have here. I would have liked to play with your punctuation a little, I felt it held you back from truly riding that wave of intimacy… but otherwise, sweet and sensual…
Super intense passion. Incredibly honest and real. I love the straightforward approach of this.
To be desired is so empowering, but once revealed, can be used against us.
Nice exotic write Craig!
Thanks Reese!
Well done.