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Value My Thoughts

Value My Thoughts

Can you value my thoughts
Or at least
Cater to the ego
Of my unusual emotion
Because the way you make me feel…
Shallow respirations !
You’re so beautiful
Being around you…
Is a tease every time !
Your presence is addicting
My attraction to you
Drives my senses wild!
Everything about you
Intrigues me!
Makes me want u that much more.
It’s amazing how such a  melancholy vibe
Shines with such delightful aura!
Never did I imagine
You of all people
Would affect me in this way
Never did I imagine
That desire
Would dominate my mind this way.
If you look at me long enough.
You’ll notice…
That I’m see-through.
So I figured I’d tell you
B4 you had the chance to realize
All obvious things…
That I try to hide !
I love you!

© 2011 Craig Watson


About Mr. Watson

I'm a person who believes in Happiness & Love... I feel that it empowers us to unimaginable heights... Not just the aspect of Romance... But a Love for Life... Beauty & the Unknown! However, As Positive as I try to be... the struggles of Life are relevant in my world... Perfection doesn't exist and Wise Choices haven't always been made! I try to describe those things in full detail... Bringing u visual imagery through my Poetry ! I Love Feedback... GOOD... or BAD.

31 responses »

  1. Nice one again

  2. I think we have all felt like this before.. 🙂 good one!

  3. Yes, these are familiar feelings. Very nice poem!

    My offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic:

  4. The feeling of being in love, expressed in such a universal way. We are all see-through beings at such times 🙂

  5. awwwww! love always make me go googoo gagga and nice emotional poems as well, sweet! 🙂
    here’s mine:

  6. I’d be concerned leaving that much on the table at one time lest she take advantage.. but that’s a whole different poem.. Nice write.

  7. It’s amazing how such a melancholy vibe
    Shines with such delightful aura!

    Man I have to say I have always been attracted to the melancholy vibe! lol

  8. that’s reasonable request.

    well expressed.

  9. Ah, so long ago! But we always remember our first love.

  10. Amazing…. A poem into which any one can live in… feel a part of themselves… superb… thanks for share…

  11. Lovely. Sincere. I hope the feelings are reciprocated.

  12. Beautiful. I like this.

  13. Been there! Hell, I’m there right now. You did a great job of capturing this particularly frustrating feeling.

  14. Often difficult to say, but so easy to do. Lovely.

  15. some divine sentiments shared, well done.

  16. I appreciate some of your more unusual word/phrasing choices – the melancholy vibe juxtaposed with the delightful aura, and the part about “if you look at me long enough you’ll see I’m see-trough”. I do, however, wish you wouldn’t use “u” for “you” – that tends to turn me off of a piece because it seems so unpolished.

    • Well I appreciate the comment! I just reread the poem… And I see where I wrote “u” instead of “you”! That was a mistake in this particular poem… Because as you can see, I wrote “you” throughout! However I do have many poems where I use “u” … I just have fun with! I would like to think it still has the same meaning ! Thanks for stopping by! 😉


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