Value My Thoughts
Can you value my thoughts
Or at least
Cater to the ego
Of my unusual emotion
Because the way you make me feel…
Shallow respirations !
You’re so beautiful
Being around you…
Is a tease every time !
Your presence is addicting
My attraction to you
Drives my senses wild!
Everything about you
Intrigues me!
Makes me want u that much more.
It’s amazing how such a melancholy vibe
Shines with such delightful aura!
Never did I imagine
You of all people
Would affect me in this way
Never did I imagine
That desire
Would dominate my mind this way.
If you look at me long enough.
You’ll notice…
That I’m see-through.
So I figured I’d tell you
B4 you had the chance to realize
All obvious things…
That I try to hide !
I love you!
© 2011 Craig Watson
Mr. Watson 
Nice one again
Thank you !
I think we have all felt like this before.. 🙂 good one!
Thank u! & Thanks for visiting…
Yes, these are familiar feelings. Very nice poem!
My offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/
Thank u
The feeling of being in love, expressed in such a universal way. We are all see-through beings at such times 🙂
Thank you 🙂
awwwww! love always make me go googoo gagga and nice emotional poems as well, sweet! 🙂
here’s mine: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/vanished/
Lol thank u! Glad u enjoyed! I’ll be sure to check u out…
I’d be concerned leaving that much on the table at one time lest she take advantage.. but that’s a whole different poem.. Nice write.
Ha true… But whats life without chance… Glad u enjoyed!
It’s amazing how such a melancholy vibe
Shines with such delightful aura!
Man I have to say I have always been attracted to the melancholy vibe! lol
U and I both! Lol! Thanks ….
that’s reasonable request.
well expressed.
Thank u !
Ah, so long ago! But we always remember our first love.
Yes we do 🙂 thanks…
Amazing…. A poem into which any one can live in… feel a part of themselves… superb… thanks for share…
Glad u enjoyed ! Thank u:-)
Lovely. Sincere. I hope the feelings are reciprocated.
Yes indeed! 🙂 thank you
Beautiful. I like this.
Thank u! Glad u stopped by…
Been there! Hell, I’m there right now. You did a great job of capturing this particularly frustrating feeling.
Thank you! 🙂
Often difficult to say, but so easy to do. Lovely.
Thanks 🙂
some divine sentiments shared, well done.
I appreciate some of your more unusual word/phrasing choices – the melancholy vibe juxtaposed with the delightful aura, and the part about “if you look at me long enough you’ll see I’m see-trough”. I do, however, wish you wouldn’t use “u” for “you” – that tends to turn me off of a piece because it seems so unpolished.
Well I appreciate the comment! I just reread the poem… And I see where I wrote “u” instead of “you”! That was a mistake in this particular poem… Because as you can see, I wrote “you” throughout! However I do have many poems where I use “u” … I just have fun with! I would like to think it still has the same meaning ! Thanks for stopping by! 😉