Daydreaming In The Night
Daydreaming in the night
The sun is shining….
Not a cloud in the sky
Endless meadows…
With an array of sweet smelling flowers
And u sitting under a tree…
Reading a book perhaps.
However…
It’s night fall.
And the moon is skating across
This body of water….
In front of me.
Not one grain of sand around ….
Yet,
A hint of sea breeze…
Causes me to inhale.
Laughter…
As it tickles my nose.
Causing me to exhale.
Caught in 2 different worlds at this very moment
Enjoying u to the fullest rapture.
The sun is shining brighter than ever
Clouds imprinting the bluest sky….
That feeling of a refreshing
Deep breath
Is carrying me throughout the night.
And then a kiss!
There’s that sea breeze again…
Maybe because that’s where it happened.
A brisk chill of the night brings me to reality…
I think the earth is standing still at this very moment!
But this is more than a dream.
As I open my eyes…
Those lips r really touching mine.
Soft as a leaf falling from a tree
Swaying back and forth
Until it barely touches this body of water…
In front of me
Floating ….
Just like me!
© 2011 Craig Watson
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love it
Thank u! No problem! Appreciate it! 🙂
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Really enjoy this piece. I can close my eyes and see it the vision being portrayed. Keep up the good work.
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Very nice — I was really seeing this as I read it. Loved the way you used “u” and “2” — I know that might sound strange but it really made me take notice. 😉
Haha it doesn’t sound strange at all… Thank you;-) glad u enjoyed
I enjoy the images; I encourage you to not use “r” for “are” and “u” for “you” – for me it interrupted the flow of the poem.
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This was wonderful, love the part where it wasn’t just a dream. 🙂
Thank u
it must be cool to be able to daydream like that,
enjoyed your word flow and your poetry is very shiny and sunny.
Thanks.
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hmmm this reads so sweet…as if reality is so good it feels like a dream lucky!!!
Happy gooseberry day!!
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Thank u! And u as well!
Really nice one, Craig. Very dreamy and melodic. Well done!
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NEAT!
🙂
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In my mind’s eye, I could envision the body of water in front of you as being the one you are dreaming of. This is so lovely. Thank you!
Thank u! Really appreciate it:-)
Wonderful piece here. I like the freedom you gave your muse to roam and enable you paint magic with words. Outstanding!
These lines are priceless: ‘And the moon is skating across/ This body of water…’
Have a fruitful week ahead.
Cheers!
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Ahhh Mr. Watson I see you are a poet as well! I like your work!
Thank you! And I try 🙂 thanks for stopping by!
Lovely little vignette.
Thank u 🙂
Lovely dreamy poem 🙂
Thank u Ina ! 🙂
How beautiful, serene and dreamy. Wonderful place to be.. 🙂
Thank u:-)
it has a delightful flow to it, whimsical almost!
Thanks Karen!
You write with such passion and vigour.
I hope to aspire to your rank one day.
Thank you for sharing
Regards
The PostMan
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nice
You’ve done a superb job with this piece! Your creative style is very unique and your sense of imagination is immeasurable…
Thank you Tasha. I truly appreciate it 😀
Lovely Mr.Watson.. as usual.. wonderful piece of write
Thank you 🙂
How time stands still in love:) – wonderful!
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Really enjoyed reading this, it was sweetly romantic and I could actually feel the sea breeze on my face and taste the salt on my tongue. Very well done. Be blessed!
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Splendid daydream..!
Great imagery..I could imagine the waves and the breeze..
happy rally!
Thank you Veronica !:-) Glad you enjoyed!